Song of thought
Honour in a melody
all that's in my head
A reflection of your words
amazed all you did and said.
Beat in your every move
your hope survives in dream
obvious remains your talent
hidden reality left unseen.
Your mind was destined for a far away land
where hopes promise is an eternal bliss -
My beginning is your touch
My ending is your kiss
my god, aine, are you serious?? you've become a literary genius! michael is working his wonder through you!! (:(:
ReplyDelete"Your mind was destined for a far away land
where hopes promise is an eternal bliss -
My beginning is your touch
My ending is your kiss "
i loved the way you didn't end this last line.. there is no ending to love, is there?
your mind was destined for a faraway land.. aine, you might as well have been talking about yourself, or me, and hopefully we will join him there.. i love this piece with all my heart, it's so beautiful and hopeful.. there.. you have a romantic poem here.. thank michael.. as i thank him for having found you! (:
great job!
-mena